Kiranjit's blog-feedback...

She has a lot of information of her main text including articles. This gives her the chance to see others views on the film and maybe give her ideas to help her.

She has so much information on other texts such as historical texts and contemporary texts. This will give her the chance to compare the texts and see the changes over time.

To help with the other side she could get information on the other side of the argument such as how women’s roles haven’t changed. So far kiranjit has information on how the roles are changing in films and included texts to prove this such as Alien, a text that I will b using for my historical text.

Kiranjits first paragraph is good, straight to the point which is good because you would want to talk about things that is irrelevant. The plan is well set out and easy to follow and understand. This will make it easier for her to write her essay. It detailed and well structured so she knows what she has missed out and what goes where.